The Effects of Pollution
Shaun Ingram

Pollution is defined as a pollute or being polluted.  Although America holds a small number of the worlds population, it is the number one cause of pollution today.  There are many factors of pollution.  One factor many people are concerned with is air pollution.  This mainly because of the effect it takes on the ozone.  Environmental pollution is terrible in the world today.  People get done smoking and just throw the cigarette out the door.  Environmental pollution also involves trash and other things.  Pollution of water and the high risk of it are also a main factor.  Pollution in general is can be seen all across the globe.  This pollution effects all people, animals, places and things.

The enviroment is effected everyday by numerous pollutions. The enviroment is made up of the land and water recources around us and the air we breath. Everyday there is some type of pollution taking place. Whether it is starting the car, throwing the trash or even making a camp fire. The enviroment around us is what we make of it. It  can be clean and everyone in it healthy or we can continue to see it fall apart. There are many groups forming worldwide to help stop such pollution. Some of these groups are the (EPA), (FSU), (UFRO), (CNET) and many others. This helps in trying to stop pollution, but is it enoulph?

There are a number of things that cause air pollution. Some of these things are pollutants, nitrogen oxides, global climate change, gases and acid rain. Air pollution causes allergies pollution makes your nose run and eys water;it makes your throat itch. Air pollution also cost people money. If air pollution causes damage to crops we pay higher prices for food. Air pollution is when little pollutes or particular matter(very tiny specks of solids) or toxic gases are in the air. People are the cause of half of global air pollution the other half is natural. Air pollution comes from many sources and can cause real problems.

Water is one of the most important recources we have. People can survive without food for weeks, but without water we would die in less than a week. Millions of liters of water are needed everyday worldwide for washing, irragating crops, and cooling industrial processes, not to mention liesure industries such as swimming pools and watersports centres. Despite our dependance on water, we use it as a dumping ground for all sorts of waste, and do very little to protect the water supplies we have. There are several threats to our water resources including oil spills, trash, thermal pollution, waste and many others. Water that has been polluted causes deaths among animals, people and many plants. Water is to important to be polluting and the problem needs to be controlled.

There are three main things in air pollution that effect all living things. These are gases, non acidic particulates and toxins, and acidifying things. All three of these pollutants have been proven to affect the respiratory system and studies on laboratory animals and humans show that all three
pollutants irratate the lining of the lungs and cause respiratory stress. Acidification on the surface of water is what is the leading cause of deaths in fish and all sea creatures. Then there are the inderect effects of pollution which make up for the other half of pollution. So it is apparent
that any addition of pollution to any area of water, land or air may cause a change in the ecosystem that would ultimetly effect living things.

In the United States which is the leading cause of air pollution, the leaders are big industrius cities. Denver, Phoenix, Detroit, Chicago, Kansas City, Worcestor, Ohmaha, St. Louis, Winston-Salem, Philadelphia, Scranton, and Charleston were all found to have high levels of air pollution. China denies its problem with air pollution, when in fact they are one of the leading causes. India has banned smoking this only in public places to keep pollution down. Pollution is growing worse all over the world. Italy is on the rise with its water pollution tactics. Some of the smaller countries are beggining to create major problems with air pollution such as Afghanistan, Australia, Combodia, Indonesia, Malaysia, and many others. World pollution problems are occuring everywhere.

There are many groups in the world today trying to help out in this pollution problem. One of these is the (EPA) or Enviromental Protection Agency. This group has helped pass several laws like the Clean Air Act (CAA), The clean water act (CWA) and also the Pollution Prevention Act of 1990. They currently hold high authority in effecting peoples thought in pollution. They also hold there own page on the internet at www. epa. com. There are many parts of the (EPA) it breaks off into the (PPIS) Pollution Prevention Incentives for States, the (OPPT) Office of Pollution Prevention and Toxics, and other groups like the (NYS). All these groups are organizations that have come together to help lower the growing problem of pollution. They pass laws and do enviromental things in hopes to bring pollution down.

The world we all live in is made up of so many beautiful things. From its waters to the trees and grass to flowers and plants. But there is something people fail to realize. This beautiful world that is all around us that ingulfes us where we sleep, eat and work is being destroyed. Pollution is an increasing thing in our world's society and it is a serious issue. People don't see the effects of it right now, but in there kids and grand children's futures it is not looking so pretty then. The simplest little things done can make a difference. To keep ourselves and all living things healthy we must stop and take five seconds of our time to keep what keeps us alive healthy. Find a trash can and stop polluting our future in existence.

Introduction

In what way is America the number one cause of pollution today? Don't spend your entire intro paragraph mapping out the direction your paper is going to take. Devote this space to giving me the background of pollution--when did it first become a problem? When was it first noticed to be a problem? Strengthen your thesis considerably. What point is it that you want to prove specifically? Remember, this is a position paper. That means, you have to make a point you can stand behind and defend.

Body_1

Environment has an 'n'. What is this paragraph about? The natural environment, or the pollutants within it? Strengthen your points here. You want to maintain the focus of the paragraph on one thing, not several. How are these groups significant to the point you're trying to make? Finally, don't conclude with a question--your paper shouldn't have to ask questions because it should be providing answers. Bring closure by telling me how this idea supports the point you're trying to make in your thesis.

Body_2

This is the third time you've mentioned the number of things required to stop pollution. Get beyond that. Is this paragraph about the effects of air pollution, or the causes? Clarify. Move the definition of air pollution up to the first sentence of the intro paragraph. Your concluding sentence should tell me how this idea supports your point.

Body_3

Develop this idea of threats to our water supply. How much of the United States does it actually affect? How does water help your idea concerning air pollution? How are the two things connected? Bring closure by telling me how this idea of water is important not in and of itself, but to the thesis, to the point you're trying to prove.

Body_4

Some of these ideas should be moved to the earlier body paragraphs. What is the main point or purpose you have in this paragraph? How does that point of acidification, and the other two you mentioned, support the point made in the thesis? Is this paragraph about one of them or all of them? Clarify. Bring closure by telling me the importance of this idea to the thesis.

Body_5

Develop this idea of global involvement and accountability. Discuss each of the programs a little and show me how they're advancing into compliance with international pollution standards. Is there such a thing? Bring closure by telling me the significance of this idea to the thesis, not by restating the obvious. What would you suggest we do?

Body_6

You mention all of these groups in your first body paragraph. There's no point in your bringing them back now. Move this concept up there and focus in this paragraph on something else. Why is this idea important to the thesis?

Conclusion

Good conclusion--except, never end on an imperative invocation to the audience. Bring closure by telling me why the thesis is important.