Teen Pregnancy
Nicole Hrin

Teen pregnancy is an extremely crucial subject for most people.  The United States has the highest teenage pregnancy rate among developed countries. Each year, more than one million teenagers become pregnant.  One in nine women age fifteen to nineteen becomes pregnant each year. Forty-three percent of all adolescent women become pregnant at least once before age twenty.  Approximately 2,800 adolescents become pregnant each day.  About 1,300 will give birth; 1,100 will have abortions; 400 will miscarry. Forty thousand young mothers drop out of American schools each year.  Many endure dramatic social and economic hardships and become dependent on welfare.  Eighty-two percent of adolescent pregnancies are unintended, three-fourths of them because the couple did not use birth control.  In fact, most sexually active teens make their first visit to a family planning clinic to get a pregnancy test.

Teen pregnancy can affect a teenager in two ways, good or bad.  There is the good way when there is dedication from both parents.  The parent's mother and father are a great deal of help, if they are willing to help.  Basically, support from anyone will help the situation.  On the bad side, if there is only support from one parent, mother or father, would be awful.  It is a great deal of responsibility to take on as being a teenage parent.  The job is not easy in anyway.  It is very expensive to raise a child, if the parents decide to keep the child.  Teenage parents have a three decisions, abortion,  adoption, and keeping the child.  Yes, it is hard to know what is the right decision and what is the wrong decision.  It is based on how the parents of  the child are brought up.  Some kids are taught from a young age that abortion is wrong, and in that case, they are left with two choices.  Both ways the parents have to be willing to sacrifice their own feelings for their unborn child.

There is a new campaign to prevent teen pregnancy, National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy (NCPTP).  The NCPTP was founded in 1996; it is a nonprofit, non partisan initiative supported almost entirely by private donations.  High rates of teen pregnancy burden not only teenagers, but also their children, families, and communities, while imposing large costs on taxpayers as well.  To reduce teenage pregnancy, the Campaign provides a national presence and leadership to raise awareness of the issue and to attract new voices and resources to the cause.  It provides concrete assistance to those already working in the field.  The Campaign also tries to ease the many disagreements that have plagued both the national and local efforts to address this problem.

The mission of the Teenage Parent Council of Austin, Inc., is to implement programs that address prevention of teenage pregnancy, and to facilitate and provide essential services to pregnant and parenting teens and their families.  The Teenage Parent Council of Austin, Inc. believes that the delay of parenting in adolescent years is important to the well-being of teens, families and, ultimately, our community and society.  They are also believe that the quality and accessibility of services are crucial in the reduction of risks of problems related to teenage pregnancy and early parenthood.  The use of volunteers is a significant means to enhance services for pregnant and parenting teens.  Adolescent parents can become capable, successful parents, and productive members of society.  The Teenage Parent Council of Austin, Inc. seeks to address four goals.  Focus community concern and awareness on adolescent pregnancy and parenthood.   Provide essential services to pregnant and parenting teens.  Encourage networking and coordination among service of pregnant and parenting teens.  Encourage the development of public policies supporting the mission of the Council.

When adolescents become pregnant, they need the same physical care as adult women, as the symptoms are the same for both adults and teenagers. Although the pregnant adolescent is treated the same way as an adult with regard to the body, teenagers need extra care in the way of psychological and emotional support.  They need help and encouragement, as well as guidance on the transition from pregnancy to parenthood.  Loved ones should help the pregnant adolescent set realistic goals for life after pregnancy, such as returning to work or school and her relationship with the baby's father.  All of these need to be attended to for the well-being of the mother as well as the child and father.

There are problems teenage mothers can experience during pregnancy.  Teenage mothers have a higher rate of anemia and pregnancy induced hypertension.  Babies are more likely to be born premature and suffer from low birth weight.  The babies can also be predisposed to mental retardation, brain damage, and injury at birth.  The babies can develop problems such as poor weight gain, premature labor, placenta abruptio, preeclampsia, and can be born stillborn. The younger the mother, the greater the risk of complications for both the mother and her child.  Some of these problems are due to the teenager's physical immaturity, the fact that they are still growing and poor nutrition.  Other problems happen because the pregnant teenager denies the fact that she is pregnant or ignores it, which delays getting proper care for the growing baby inside of her.

Education about responsible sexual behavior and specific, clear information about the consequences of sexual intercourse (including pregnancy and sexual transmitted diseases) is frequently not offered in the home, at school, or in other community settings.  Therefore, much of the "sex education" that adolescents receive filters through misinformed or uninformed peers.   Children need to be taught about the possibility of pregnancy.  They need to know the consequences of having sex at such a young age.  Years ago it was practically a sin to have sex before marriage, and now a days its casual and a everyday experience.  It is sad to see someone feel their life is ruined because he/she is going to have a baby at such a young age. 

Teenage pregnancy is crucial topic.  So many teenage girls are being pregnant for the wrong reasons.  More than half of the girls are not with their "so called" boyfriend, and they wish that they would have waited until they are older and married to have their next child, if she wants another.  There is so much pressure put on teenagers that pregnancy should not be their main focus.   Slowly, the percentage is decreasing, but it should stay decreasing.  It is better to wait to have kids until marriage, when two people are able to support the child.  Children need to be taught this idea at an early age when they can understand what is right and what is wrong.  Kids do not think like this because they are kids themselves. 

Nicole, this is a really nice paper, but you are lacking a strong, central thesis to unify the paper and give it a direction, and you're lacking citations of your source material--that could be taken care of by inserting hyperlinks throughout these paragraphs where appropriate. Your paragraphs could also stand a bit further editing work.

Intro

Nice intro--this is solid information--where did you get your facts, though? You should cite your source, or create a hyperlink to it. Concerning the issue of teen pregnancy, are these numbers for unmarried teens exclusively, or do they include women who marry at 18 and are pregnant at 19? You also need to give this paper some direction--give me a thesis statement that tells me what you want to do in this paper. The more specific your thesis the better your paper will be in drawing associated ideas to discuss it.

Body1

Strengthen that intro sentence to say that pregnancy has a strong effect on a teen whether good or bad. Focus in this paragraph on those options you feel are left the teen and develop each option in context with its importance to the future of the teen(s). Concerning the child's receiving love from both parents, do you mean it would be the ideal situation if both parents got married--the assumption being that they weren't married before the pregnancy occurred? Good concluding sentence.

Body2

Does the NCPTP have a website? If so, create a hyperlink. Develop the idea behind those disagreements that this campaign has tried to ease--what disagreements have there been? Specifically what does this campaign do in providing a national presence? Does it enter high schools and sponsor teen workshops? Does it provide funding for troubled teenage girls to work in maternity wards as candy striper assistants so that they can get a glimpse of what maternity would be like? Does it focus on condom distribution and the education of teenage males about the hazards of premature sexual activity? Be specific. Bring closure by telling me how this campaign is significant in proving your thesis.

Body3

Does this Council have a website? If so, create a hyperlink. Discuss these four goals in terms of their concrete reality--what services are specifically provided to pregnant and parenting teens, for instance. Wouldn't their endorsement of support groups of pregnant teens take away the social stigma of having a child out of wedlock and encourage further sexual behavior? Does attaching a social stigma to teen pregnancy serve as a deterrent, or does it just make the pregnant girl feel even worse about herself? In that case, should the girl be comforted? Is it all about the girl? What role does this Council play in confronting adolescent players who are impregnating these girls? Bring closure by telling me the significance of this council to your thesis.

Body4

Open this paragraph by introducing the idea of how pregnant teens should be treated--as humans rather than as monstrosities who have destroyed their parents home and made a mockery of all the values their parents ever taught them. Then move into ensuring they receive all the physical care of an adult woman, with all the additional psychological and emotional care of a confused teen. Develop this paragraph along those lines and your transitions won't seem as choppy. Bring closure by telling me the significance of this idea of positive and encouraging treatment to the thesis--by treating the pregnant teen with the same respect as one would treat a pregnant adult, is it possible that the wrong message is being sent to the teen that it is okay to get pregnant out of wedlock. Instead of taking a shotgun to the young man who impregnated the girl, how is it possible for the family of the girl to welcome that adolescent into their home as part of their family? Would marriage be expected of the two immediately? What if neither want to marry? Should that be a consideration? Finally, in today's society, many teens have grown up in matriarchal families where their parental role model is their mother and they have had no stable father figures in their lives. If this is all they know, then how are they to be blamed when they repeat the mistakes of their mothers?

Body5

Develop this idea alongside the types of prenatal care teens can have that will prevent them from developing problems such as these. Obviously, once a girl starts menstruating, she's reached sexual maturity--in the earlier days of our nation, girls were married off as early as 14--as late as three generations ago, girls were married right out of high school at 17 or 18. It has only been in recent years that women have started to wait longer before they have children, to give themselves time to finish college, start a career, etc. How then is it possible for teens to experience worse complications than a woman in her 20s if teens are physically capable of becoming mothers. You mentioned in the previous paragraph that teens were physically identical to adults in terms of pregnancy--what distinctions are being drawn in this paragraph.

Body6

A sex education program would be a great idea, but when and where would you implement it? On the middle school level? the high school level? And in what way would it be implemented? By a lecture? a video? the distribution of condoms to all the girls in gym class and instructions on how to place them on a penis? would not hands on direct action like this make the girls more confident about having sex rather than deter them from that possibility? How do you balance disemination of information with keeping up a healthy sense of mystery and fear?

Conclusion

You mean, they plan to wait until they are older and married to have their next child. Are teenage pregnancy rates decreasing due to the rise in free abortion clinics that will perform abortions without parental knowledge or consent, or is this decrease due instead to greater awareness about the potential of a teen's sexuality?

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